The changelog says you're removing a bunch of field names from the
document, but then section 2.1 has a bunch of defined field names.
And the list of field names is a bit hard to read. Reading it multiple
times made me realize what the point was, but I think it could use a
higher level introduction stating that all LSes need important
elements for delivery that include the sending organization (From:),
the contacts at that organization (From-Contact:), ......
Feedback from Wes: