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Author: Hoverbear

content/blog/2025-09-28-folder-notes-in-obsidian-publish/index.md

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 Recently, I've been participating in some very fun TTRPG games. [Obsidian](https://obsidian.md/) has become my favorite tool for taking notes.
 One plugin I've found which I quite like is [Folder Notes](https://github.com/LostPaul/obsidian-folder-notes).
 
-I ended up getting a [Publish](https://obsidian.md/publish) subscription, and wanted to have a similar experience on the published site.
-This weekend, I sat down and hacked a bit on it.
+I ended up getting a [Publish](https://obsidian.md/publish) subscription, and wanted mimic the behavior Folder Notes work on the published site.
+This weekend, I sat down and hacked on it a bit.
 I'm relatively pleased with the end result and wanted to share.
 
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